Sunday, October 5, 2014

Magpie Tales 240...Captive


photo by Tom Chambers

Her dreams urge escape
to neon and city life
Nightmare barbs hold fast


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The Magpie Tales prompt this week is a cool photo--to me, this looked like a failed dash for freedom...

24 comments:

  1. I enjoyed this, nice use of haiku form.

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  2. lovely take on the prompt. I really liked the Haiku :)

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    1. Haiku is like a tiny short story... ;D

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  3. You summed up the prompt beautifully...

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  4. Perhaps she could put a litttle set of stairs over the wire so she can easily traverse the two ?

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    1. But where's the drama in that?? ;D

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  5. This was the perfect prompt for a haiku. I thought it but couldn't make it fit. Nice!

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  6. Excellent. I wish I could write one of these.

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  7. She will escape! I just know it!

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  8. Very concise ...I enjoyed it immensely

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    1. Thanks...nothing like haiku for brevity. ;D

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