Breakfast, 1921, Fernand Leger
Solitary meal
Sterile awareness
White walls absorbing color
Dark despair curling to choke
Razor sharp body
Thin as paper dreams
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I wasn't going to post this week for the Magpie Tales 134 prompt because the picture just didn't do it for me. But then, as I looked carefully at the image, the last line came to me. I worked backwards on this one...and ended up doing a "pick whatever line works for you" haiku within haiku.
Working backwards, now there is a most unique approach to writing ~~~ works quite well here!
ReplyDeletethe last line is perfect
ReplyDeleteVery good. Reading all backwards works very well too!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
I like how you viewed the black!
ReplyDeleteIt is a bleak picture. Your poem expresses it well!
ReplyDeleteincredible.
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